Thursday, August 19, 2010

First Line

I want to write a story. Short or novel, I'm not sure, yet. Here is the first line:

Eveline was twelve years old when she walked in on Big Brother and Blonde Girl doing it on the old ratty couch in the basement.

I wonder where it'll go... Thoughts?

1 comment:

  1. Wow, that really catches the reader's attention. Anything starting with sex is definitely a good sign.

    :P

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